Offer made, Email to other interested schools

Dear Coach LAST NAME,

I just wanted to say "hi" and follow up with the recruiting process.

I am about to visit the campus of SCHOOL NAME. They are offering me a full ride and might expect me to verbally commit soon after the visit.

My main question to you is:

INSERT ANY QUESTIONS YOU HAVE, examples BELOW

- Can you increase your scholarship offer?

- If I improve academically/athletically would you be willing to make an offer?

- Is there anything else you need from me that would increase my chances at receiving a better offer?

I want to know this because I am really serious about SCHOOL NAME, but if I am not chosen, I do not want to lose opportunities with other colleges.

We can set up a phone call soon if you prefer.

My phone number is

555-555-5555

Hope to hear from you soon!

-John Doe